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The dark
before dawn
left me beckoning...
lured by
thick vile reckoning 

The pit longs
to enthrall me
though the desolate state
should appall me
hollow emotion does call me

Soul reaches for light
yet reverie evades me this plight
yearning eclipsed with such fright

No voice to encompass my state
no solace to lesson my wait
longing for woe to abate



— poet1, Jan 11, 2010

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