Anthropomorphia

my blue dog walks through Alexanderplatz with his
anarchist wife … born poodle
they eat currywurst and drink weißbier
and then watch from the top of the television tower
how a red balloon spreads all over the square
boxes with Schrödinger's cat

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they put aside a bold bluff for the DPP squad
and ran with the chips

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hot rain left behind barmy cats playing
on the greenish meadow with
bipolar mice

wheels spin in the haze

© Marius Surleac

— Marius Surleac, Jan 23, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Romania, ROU

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

As always, a pleasure to see

As always, a pleasure to see and read you. Thank you. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine

Marius Surleac

16 years 4 months ago

thank you

Hi Kailashana. Thank you very much for your kind comment. I'm glad you liked it. Cheers, Marius

whitetea

16 years 4 months ago

I loved the Schrödinger’s

I loved the Schrödinger’s cat reference. Very clever write. How did you come up with this?

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

great to see you post and love the piece

sorry I missed this at the time. Great piece, intellesurrealistic, is that a word? It is now. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

Marius Surleac

16 years 2 months ago

glad to be back

Whitetea, I'm glad you like it. The idea came from physics, quantum physics to be more precise. Since I'm a physicist, I like combining poetry with physics. :D Jess, I'm glad to be back and to find again the atmosphere I missed. I'm delighted to find out your opinion regarding the poem and you should patent the "intellesurrealistic" word. Hope you'll like what is supposed to come since I'm working on my volume. The poem above will be part of the book. Thank you both for your precious comments. Regards, Marius

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