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adjei agyei-baah
Jan 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Daughter of Eve

Sweet daughter of eve
Beautiful and delightful to my sight
But sweet delimma  you bring too
Wish I could invite you into my eden
But I wonder if you may stay for long
— adjei agyei-baah, Jan 24, 2010

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Country/Region: GHA

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

not enough

I would like to see this expnaded on. I feel it falls short but has a beautiful beginning Chrys
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Short and sweet

Getting the message across, yes, but I too would like to see more. Apart from that, it reads well and has tweaked the curiosity. Love Lyz. XX

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