Abigail and Laurali

Abigail and Laurali,

Abigail meet laurali
our gift from up above
Laurali we all say hi
you shall be our dove

Laurali and Abigail
sisters of the blood
Both be fair of hair and eye
so much fun to love

Abigail and Laurali
laughing on the shore
Laurali asked Abigail
can we play some more

Abigail smiled almost sly
for always sister dear
Laurali spun under blue sky
I hope you're always near

Abigail and Laurali
thier love so crystal clear
Laurali and Abigail
will have naught to fear

Laurali and Abigail
sisters of the blood
Both be fair of hair and eye
so much fun to love

Abigail and Laurali
best friends from the start
Laurali has come from high
to steal our lonely hearts

Julie

1/27/2010

— DawningDaytripper, Jan 29, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

Critiques

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

That MUST be the most fantastic happening

What a delightful way of suggesting a name Julie they should be helped but then, its their child! I was looking for a name as I wanted children and started before it was a actual event to take place, I never had any use for the task, no children so have to make do with others. That MUST be the most fantastic happening in anybodies life. Fun this Julie love from Anskie bird

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Abby and Lauri...

What a great way to suggest a name for a child! about to suggest that Laurali should have something to say about it, but...I don't know how that would work. I like the theme, just wish there was a way to expand on it. Very nice work, ~ Love ya, Gee

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