Geezer

Feb 04, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Yes, You Are...

Dark and lovely lady

A heart that hasn't healed

Roses not for me

Kin to all who suffer

And lonely in herself

No, she doesn't think she is sensitive

Dwelling on trouble not her own

Longing for justice, in this world

Only thinking of another's plight

Valuing the good

Emoting here on Neo

Little trust in her heart

Yes... You are sensitive

Lonely old folk, I hear your song

Able lover, he missed the spot

David, our team fought for you

Yes...You are sensitive

— Geezer, Feb 04, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Gee

You did a splendid job ... is this one for Annie ?? sorry I am not up to critiquing huni I just popped in to see whats been written and saw this one pop into stream love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you...

Yes, this is for Annie, and I am glad it came out well. I haven't been all that well and sorry it took me so long to answer. Love and hugs, ~ Gee

hardcorechick28

16 years 4 months ago

good job

Really deep....seems to be personal in nature....I thought it was very well written!!!!

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

I'm so glad...

that this came out as well as it did. It was meant to be personal, and I am glad that it came through that way. She challenged me to prove that she is sensitive and I think I did. Thank you, and missed you this weekend. ~ Gee

hardcorechick28

16 years 4 months ago

missed you

as well this weekend!!! I think you rose to the challenge beautifully!!!! What kind of poem do i get for my birthday??? Not til July, so you got time LMAO, just kidding!!!!! Love ya

Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Great work, Geezer!

You've shown us all how to put forth a powerful poem with this fine piece! I bow to your obvious talent and poetic truth!

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks for...

the kudos, Lonnie. I didn't know then how it was going to turn out, but I am glad that everyone liked it as much as they did. As to talent, I hope that I have some. thanks again. ~ Gee

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

I never...

underestimate a lovely woman Annie. By now, I imagine that you have looked for David. He was the baby in your poem Toxic and Cloudy Fluid. Yes, you are guilty, guilty, guilty. I sentence you to feeling good about yourself, for a period of not less than the rest of your life! We are ready for you, my little dog and I. Bring it on! Love you too, in the Neo way, ~ Gee

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you for sharing...

parts of your life with us, and giving me the room to make this poem for you. I tried hard to show that you might just be sensitive. I guess it worked, because we got some really good feedback on it. I didn't know about your ex. I have been wondering about little David though and I am glad that he is doing well. Love ya, N.W ~ Gee

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

you are such a sensitive fellow yourself my good

This shows that you are such a sensitive fellow yourself my good kind hearted knight, Sir Gee. I like it from that point of view, I don't quite know the background so don't fully understand it. Hope it helps the someone as it has such good feelings in it. Yours with love from your queenie Anskie bird "Roses not for me Kin to all, who suffer And lonely in herself"......Why the comma after kin to all(,) I would have put a comma after "And lonely in herself" It was just odd to see the one in the middle when the other parts are not punctuated!

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Sensitivity is...

my middle name, My Queen. Annie had challenged me to prove that she is sensitive, and and asked me to write a poem for her birthday. I took a sentence or thought from a few of her poems, and made a poem for her. I also have fixed the errors in puncuation. I haven't felt the best lately, but seem to be getting better. Thank you for the compliments, and love to my queen. ~ Sir Gee

DawningDaytripper

16 years 4 months ago

Great tribute piece for

Great tribute piece for Annie, very personal. But well written. Great B-day present. Do we all get one for out birthday Gee?! JK that would be alot of work!! Thanks for sharing you two, I include you both. Gee the writer, Annie being the subject. Not easy around here all the time. lol Julie D.D.

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

I might have started something here...

Thanks, I had hoped that it would come out well, and it did. I'm glad everyone enjoyed it. She was a good subject and I loved the challenge to show that she is indeed sensitive. We here at Neo. love all our family, as dysfunctional as it may be at times. LOL ~ Love ya, ~ Gee

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