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shower us (they pray)

It has started now
slow and soft, seductions
kisses falling from clouds
to parched and gasping skin,
soaking into longing
and time spent waiting 
for this embrace.

I hear you,
on the roof and on these leaves of grapes,
your silver lines drawn down
beyond my window screen,
into the clearing
before these Mountain Gums,
petitioners at forests edge
white arms raised
as supplicants,
shower us (they pray.)
— Craig Norris, Feb 04, 2010

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Country/Region: AUS

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Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Craig

I am not sure where you live but I just read your poem after looking at weather warning for NSW ... I am guessing you guys got some rain(send some our way its boiling hot and muggy) lol ... a beautiful poem you got my nom and my stars this time brilliantly written and nothing to change imo kind regards Jayne-Chloe
CN

Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Seren

I'm on the southwest slopes, tucked into the hills, thirty minutes from the Murray river, you know, "Man from Snowy River country" Apologies for being so absent, lifes been getting in the way, you know how it does. cheers(and thanks) Craig
S

Sensoul

16 years 2 months ago

‘tis reads but a love

'tis reads but like a love poeme..like kisses borne on the raindrops from afar finally falling on parched longings...sounds that way to me, these beautiful rain drops:). Kindly, Sensoul
CN

Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

yes

sometimes in summer without rain, when it comes you can feel the thanks. a long time longing in life how sweet these drops that kiss the earth cheers Craig

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