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Feb 14, 2010
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A Gothic Valentine
A bloated moon was hanging low
in a somber sky
making shadows seem to grow
and unseen horrors fly
The graveyard gate was thick with rust
and made an evil sound
as I kicked it in the dust
and entered Hallowed ground
Gnarled and twisted limbs were creaking
as I walked within
like demon voices shrilly shrieking
evil words of sin
The sepulchur loomed up ahead
its doorway gaping wide
a mouth that swallows up the dead
digesting them inside
I tore the coffin lid away
and there before my eye
the love of all my life still lay
a love that would not die
My hands caressed her morbid charms
my lips sought hers in bliss
and wrapping me in loving arms
she killed me with a kiss
C. Lon R. Bruso
in a somber sky
making shadows seem to grow
and unseen horrors fly
The graveyard gate was thick with rust
and made an evil sound
as I kicked it in the dust
and entered Hallowed ground
Gnarled and twisted limbs were creaking
as I walked within
like demon voices shrilly shrieking
evil words of sin
The sepulchur loomed up ahead
its doorway gaping wide
a mouth that swallows up the dead
digesting them inside
I tore the coffin lid away
and there before my eye
the love of all my life still lay
a love that would not die
My hands caressed her morbid charms
my lips sought hers in bliss
and wrapping me in loving arms
she killed me with a kiss
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Feb 14, 2010
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Critiques
Dark.Poetress
16 years 3 months ago
i love it it is one of the
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you very much!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
A twister this?
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina!
poewriter58
16 years 3 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you, Dear!
poewriter58
16 years 3 months ago
Lon
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Geat oe Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks much!
infinite_dwarf
16 years 3 months ago
Dad
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you, Daughter Dear!
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Jayne!
arja
16 years 3 months ago
…wonderful, love with a
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you, Alone!
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Lon
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
spooooky
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