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the wild geese returned today

robin red breast sits on the crab
apple tree, looks at me
as if he has something to say,
cocks his head this way and that,
wondering if I'm listening

we begin a silent dialogue, I ask him
how his journeys went and if he had missed
me, he laughs with his feathers all puffed
and fluffed out, he hops
with joy, from branch to branch.

"You're such a silly old bird."



— Kailashana, Feb 19, 2010

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Lovely view…I could

Lovely view...I could actually see this image in my head as I read your words...very funny sight for me. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mumm … I am so glad

Dear Mumm ... I am so glad the first signs of spring autumn is showing her face at night its starting to cool down but its nice ,... loving the cooler nights ... really loved this one I could see that bird hopping from one foot to the other well done love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x btw you should read my poem and the name lol
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Stefan

16 years 3 months ago

hi

Short and sweet, the word play was fantastic. Stef

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