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words to f*** with (i'm no Madame)

words to f*** with (i'm no Madame)

i am a poet
by nature and instinct, i abuse words
just to see how they form opinions,
i am deadly accurate but by no means
a silent killer,
i leave discretionary lifeless words
all about me, like fallen comrades with
gluttonous verbose appetites, dancing piñatas
of every ill wind, inclinations
sliced open, words strewn everywhere
but where they belong,
in context;
although pine boxes make for good compartmentalizations
visualizations and ramifications, riots of gathering words
and sound, heady and ready
malcontents
if and when word-eating microbes run rampant
just as serials of inclination become as much as an apt pupil,
learning the tricks of my trade–
a marksman of the highest caliber
i hit the bulls eye with regularity
and never take laxatives or let loose the bowels
of synonyms and homonyms nor are
fixatives, curatives, ligatures and signatures imbibed or laid aside
for later perusal
i am
notoriously big, a rapper and a clapper
restitution is an institution that predisposes,
posits revisions and recisions
words like common whores of indifference
artistic choke holds
and slam dunks at coffee shops,
open twenty-four hours a day,
breaking logic, fingers chewed to the bone
to find the right taste and substance,
cutting edges off holes of indecision
necessitating
microsurgery without benefit of anesthesia
i assault and assail, there is no asylum
that can contain me and you’re a fool if you
can’t read between the lines.

i’m a line-by-line addict, i throw caution to the
wind and never separate the oranges from apples,
hardly ever put the cart before the donkey or her arse.

And i’m going stark raving mad with all this white;
mountains of snow, pages of emptiness
and oppression.


— Kailashana, Feb 28, 2010

Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Buzz words for

Buzz words for skinheads....not by the hair of my chinny chin chin... However, I will huff and I will blow.... ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Yeah… and don’t I know

Yeah... and don't I know just how to get you to vote! Figured the discretionary thingy would work. Namaste Indi. Life is a lotta fun-da-mentals quaking and shaking all about... put your left foot in and get wet for Christ's sake, people get ready!!! ...all these fishermen shoes... and no one to fill 'em. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

16 years 3 months ago

Remember

It's not what people say about you that is important, it is that they are talking, and therefore thinking, about you that matters. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

So does that mean, you’ll

So does that mean, you'll be my publicist? Work for peanuts... my darling elephant in the living room? ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

What would I call a shop of word delight? A wordery

Like a child in a sweet shop of glass jarred delight I look at your poem and drool in its light Each line a trove of treasured finds of mouth filled words you do remind with currents flashing 'gluttonous verbose appetites' Bash that pinata girl shower me with your delights I'll have a 1il of that jar there top shelf on the right. Awesome is deserved by star and word Seabhac
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Loaded with their Latin forefathers blood and gritted teeth

Ann of Norway Your words here fall about like the ancient pillars of Greece and Italy, loaded with their Latin forefathers blood and tears, gritted teeth and salami, you entertain us with the music of language and that is what makes me tick, its what makes poetry shout and fall and tumble into our minds to do its damage to our intellects and leave laughing at its own panache, dash and flashing bitten nails and busting big bloomers, And all that stuff, we toss and turn in the bedding of your poem as if voyeurs of your life and the sound, its that that wins for me are wonderful. Here I am only writing a little drunk after your draughty poem. Dear Anna you never cease to surprise us with your variety Anuska.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dearest Mum

*smile* .... pmsl .... and I love you .... Love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
D

DimondDivinity

16 years 3 months ago

WOW

almost don't know what to say this was amazing the words just flow!! Keyanna
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

Open eyes

I didn't think it would finally hapen ! My eyes have been opened - WIDE ! A freaking MAD write ! Love it ! Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."
NM

Nicole Michaels

16 years 3 months ago

Genre

I'm pretty sure this is what is commonly called a rant.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

To all who read my rant, I

To all who read my rant, I give thanks.. In reference to the spotlight bruhaha.... it will be an ongoing issue as long as two people exist....there's a high probability of differing views. Sometimes, they're actually spotlighted poems. ;-) ~ "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
B

buggles

16 years 3 months ago

way to go

Very well said, and very penned, a delight to read, you get the thumbs up from me....Eddy
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

I promise I won’t put

I promise I won't put screws to your thumbs, bwuggles. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
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Lunegirl

16 years 3 months ago

WOW i bet you could rant

WOW i bet you could rant about pants and still make it sound wicked. this is an awsom write, loving the word useage, the way they slice and cut the consiounce (please exscuse the fwit spelling) vix xx Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes
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Lunegirl

16 years 3 months ago

WOW i bet you could rant

WOW i bet you could rant about pants and still make it sound wicked. this is an awsom write, loving the word useage, the way they slice and cut the consiounce (please exscuse the fwit spelling) vix xx Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

I knew I’d have to borrow

I knew I'd have to borrow your real name sooner or later, Missy Vixy. Never let it be said I let a rant go by the seat of my pants. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti

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