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judyanne
judyanne
Mar 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

For Rosina

Through my eyes

my sense

hearing,

I would bequeath to you

The Knowledge.

If I only could.

 

Description. Words only.

Black on white

open interpretation.

My wish, my desire.

To give you my body.

So you would have eyes and ears

to hear the small voice

lost in the noise of life

and see the Truth

and know it is

because the feeling is Divine.

 

Then Rosina you would know

your Catherine has not gone anywhere.



 

— judyanne, Mar 02, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Seabhac.I was

Thanks Seabhac. I was compelled to change the last line for I know Rosina believes she is safe. This change conveys a little more what I was trying to say. Judy
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Judy

This is beautiful and truly a sweet gift from the heart. Always, Cat
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Oh wow Judy! Your such a

Oh wow Judy! Your such a lovely person. This has built up my spirits no end. Thank you very very much. My sister would be proud to read this from you. If she can see me, she would've been upset at the way I fell back into my black hole. I wish I had your Faith Judy...I really do. Luv 2 u always. sincerely ( few extra stars for you ********************************************) Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

I wouldn’t call it faith,

I wouldn't call it faith, Rosina. Faith is acceptance without proof. But I know. I've been shown. If you listen for the small voice without trying to rationalise, acknowledge the communications sent with the acceptance of a child, without being afraid that it is your imagination, then you too will know. Love to you judy
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

in the end, we’re all

in the end, we're all missing pieces of each other's hearts. Saying hello, saying goodbye. A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
VX

Venus x

16 years 3 months ago

What a Beautiful Spirit you have Judyanne

What a Beautiful Spirit you have Judyanne, A true gift from the heart. The "knowing" that death is not the end, but only the beginning is a wonderous thing. Thank you Judy for sharing this beautiful pen. Love and Hugs, Venus xxxx
VX

Venus x

16 years 3 months ago

Yes, I know

Yes, I know as you know. While I was reading your poem last night, I got a flash of a painting or drawing, not sure which, or why? but I was tired and tuned it out, if you know what I mean? Also since joining this group, I've had three female spirits that seem to come at different times, I can distinguish them from the smell they have. One is Channel #5, one is White Shoulders, and the other is a lilac smell. I have no idea if they belong to someone here, or it's coming from the "other side" but they only seem to appear when I'm in this group. One other thing I've seen is a little boy playing with a dog, again no idea where he belongs??? Yes, indeed, the "Other side" is very real and once we get out of that negative place within ourselves and listen, it can become very real for everyone. I will meditate on what you have ask, and if there is a way I can help, I will. Much Love, Light, Peace and Harmony to you dear lady, Venus xxxx
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Venus it was me with my Chanel on...

LOL I love it and I love that place you go to I wish we had one here I would really get into that as I love the inner circle and the spirits as well. Great great my venus friend flows in the winds. love mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Ohhhhh I could cry this is

Ohhhhh I could cry this is just beautiful like the person you are Judy ... proud to call you friend and countrywoman ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Very nice Judy Anne

This is a special one for Rosalina and fitting also to many of us who lost someone so dear to our hearts. Great read!! Love Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you my friend Mona.For

Thank you my friend Mona. For Rosina at this moment of time; for anybody else at the moment of time they may need it. Love to you Magics. Judy
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Such a touching tribute from

Such a touching tribute from a truely touching author and subject. Great job Judy, Rosina is a Diamond in the rough, isn't she. Or the black hole she descirbed, but light can not escape a black hole. And she shines very brightly! I totaly agree. I know not the reasons or such. But whole heartedly agree and was delighted with the read! Julie D.D.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

hi DD

sorry julie, i missed this comment. thanks for reading and for your lovely supportive words lol judy xxx

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