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Mar 04, 2010
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my poem is evermore
You’ve asked me, why do you cry
I reply, only the sky knows this,
and you say, you require the blue
of day to fade
I reply, it began at dawn
each day my lead wears down
when fingers are scribbling with a stub
will there be anything left of me to write?
or will the lead have seeped into my veins
and my finger take over
marking the lines
of time
and now I know, it doesn’t matter
as the sun curls
to warm the surface of the earth
the wind bounces off the stratosphere
singing along the equator
of love, a sea of
lobsters crawls across the dermis
of the planet,
life will go on
with or without my pencil
my poem is evermore
— Seren, Mar 04, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Gassho.~
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Gassho ~~~
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Your poems are evermore
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Good Morning Mona glad you
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Very nice :)
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
LOL I will try not to let
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Always :) anyways, whats up?
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Must come down lol ;)Love
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
A little slow on the up take
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Sooooorry lol I was bored
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
It’s all good it was very
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
~~~~((((I))))~~~~ do my best
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks for the comment … I
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
marking the lines of time
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I wouldn’t quite say
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina … I am a
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