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my poem is evermore

You’ve asked me, why do you cry
I reply, only the sky knows this,
and you say, you require the blue
of day to fade
I reply, it began at dawn


each day my lead wears down
when fingers are scribbling with a stub
will there be anything left of me to write?
or will the lead have seeped into my veins
and my finger take over
marking the lines
of time


and now I know, it doesn’t matter
as the sun curls
to warm the surface of the earth
the wind bounces off the stratosphere
singing along the equator
of love, a sea of
lobsters crawls across the dermis
of the planet,


life will go on
with or without my pencil


my poem is evermore

— Seren, Mar 04, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Your poems are evermore

Just stopping by to say good morning friend and I love this one. Love, Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

Very nice :)

I hope the lead doesn't absorb into your fingers that would be very bad, lead poisoning! Haha Anyways good write, I did enjoy the read, keep up the eternal greatness. ;)
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

LOL I will try not to let

LOL I will try not to let its seep get too deep lol ;) thanks for the comment ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

~~~~((((I))))~~~~ do my best

~~~~((((I))))~~~~ do my best to entertain~~~~((((But)))) not everyone gets me lmao thanks for the giggle :) love JayCee
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks for the comment … I

Thanks for the comment ... I would say Lyz is busy with her life but I dont know much at the moment got a lot going on in my own life and have lost touch with her the last few weeks she will be back when time and life permits
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Judy

Thank you ... you just made my face hurt smiling lol yeah I am a bit of a nutter but you just brightened my night thanks for that (hugs) much love JayCee x x x x
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I wouldn’t quite say

I wouldn't quite say `nutter`...witty...perhaps. The images you show us are always exquisite...exercising our minds. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Rosina … I am a

Thanks Rosina ... I am a little bit nuts but better nuts than nasty lol glad you liked this and I appreciate the visit (hug) love Jayne-Chloe x x

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