Sundown

clipper hue
banking full of dying light
the hull of last
fading like a breath

this days death
and turning
a speckled dark
filled with spark
emerging

journey of darling dreamland
soothe soft soot entrygains

— Esker, Mar 08, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Esker

16 years 3 months ago

1/2 wayfare

in and out the roundabout chasing common chasing rare

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