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In defence of God

To weave the fabric of the universe
Father and son toiled,
A spinneret of galaxies carefully embroiled.

A beautifully balanced symmetry
Of purposeful design,
To nurture the gift of life bestowed upon mankind.

The celestial angels shout in praise,
Standing in ovation
Joyfully singing and welcoming creation.

But in this glorious assembly
In amongst the choir
An angel hummed the lyrics of his own desire.

His libretto played to a different tone,
A tone of jealousy
Craving voices to sing his words of treachery.

Adam and Eve were settled in Eden
When Satan came along
Slyly he enticed them to chant his bitter song.

Insurrection caused their imperfection
Choosing to go off key.
Now the whole creation is out of harmony.

Jesus cared for all of Adam’s children
And came down to the earth
Played to them sweet overtones of hope, love and worth.

Some esteemed his works and composition
But others shut the door
When they heard the tenet of his kingdom overture.

His disciples learned to play his music
And sang his melody
Teaching others to sing along in sympathy.

Satan loathed the tone of their loyalty
Trying to make them yaw
Killing our Lord Jesus so he could change the score.

Droning a masterpiece of misery
Crashing cymbals of despair
Intoning that the guilt is only Gods to bare.

The world has spun for two millenniums
And would forever more
Revolve around a dirge of suffering, death and war.

Jesus was granted heavenly splendour
Now sits at God’s right hand
Waiting for the moment when he can take the stand.

Organizing and preparing his orchestra
To bring back harmony
Removing every vestige of Satan’s symphony.

The baton is ready for God’s command
For he will choose the day
Listen can you hear it, it’s not that far away.

— mand, Mar 09, 2010

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Shango007

Shango007

16 years 3 months ago

“That angel” is out of

"That angel" is out of harmony all by his lonesome lol. When all these things transpired, a hedgehog was peacefully napping and the ant was industriously wandering back and forth... when people came along, they felt a need to strive against nature. So they set up a universal table of plus and minus and a head honcho to preside over it all. But the truth is that He/She/It existed long before grizzled old men smoked opium and wrote books. So you're O.K., I'm O.K.-as long as we maintain a positive attitude... and do positive things... Great concepts, anyway ;) (steps off the soap box)
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Kaligantsaros, thanks for

Hi Kaligantsaros, thanks for commenting, it's always nice to hear what people think. This is a work in progress so there is more to come. Love Mand
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

love you troy

not at all rude troy, glad you thought that i could even write two 'beauts'. xxx
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Hello Troy, great to hear

Hello Troy, great to hear from you. Thanks for all your support with Dragon's eye. I have a feeling it's going to be "my first, my last, my everything." I have to get this epic out of my chest before I can move on to other things, it is a poem I started months ago but shelved, now I have an urge to finish it. Anyway thanks once again for dropping by, I'll visit you soon. Love Mand
MW

Miss Webb

16 years 2 months ago

Awesome

Great two part story.

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