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Mar 13, 2010
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MELANCHOLY
MELANCHOLY
Oh heavy coat of sadness
in the inner heart like madness,
please describe your art,
that I may know your part
is sent to try my dreamed dismay
to light now yet another day.
No, fear you shall not have,
my strength, you so behave
as if you were the leader
and I a mere pleader
for peace of mind and joy,
why you these tactics now employ.
I wish no burden on my friends,
life has so many curves and bends,
no sadness turn their heads,
so let that now be clearly said.
But why just now such sighing
when nobody is dying,
was it the elephant,
who expressed his deepest want......
— Nordic cloud, Mar 13, 2010
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pamela
16 years 3 months ago
love it
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Pamela
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
for sure
jetz
16 years 3 months ago
Loved this piece, and
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Hey Ann, mind if I hitch a
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I could never see you as
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Dear Ann
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
little stream how you
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Barry,
Atticus
16 years 2 months ago
Bravo Ann!
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
Your poem rhymes but is
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