Pondering the master of momentum and progression

We should be careful with pondering questions, and the answers to all second guesses. Because time is the keeper, time is the master of momentum and progression There is a handicap in hoping that will never give comfort, or validation

Peace will not be resolved, in the conquest of hope with pondering and capricious decisions

Charity will exude regardless of time; knowledge will never placate for security and direction

Each day that we breathe is the comfort of momentum and progression. Belief is the hope that will clarify the first choice of decisions

— press, Mar 17, 2010

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Simmy

16 years 2 months ago

Pondering

I think its very short, but thotfull, true and carefull, soft and sumfn to go back on to think about what lyf is realli all about and whats happening in it.

press

16 years 2 months ago

re

Simmy thanks for your love transforming into the time it took you to write a response. Yes it is short compared to most of my other poems but now my writing may be in new stages of it personality that I have to follow Simmy we are condemned to walk the road that we place a foot abound . And to feel the solid foundation beneath our feet validates our purpose . Doesn't make you smile Thanks Press

press

16 years 2 months ago

Ok Annie

Hey girl now that I am getting back into my conviction my calling to write poetry . I address the cancer on this site just like I said I would remember this ? now I am talking to rett [OK darknlovely3436 call me [ her name is Annie ] about a poem that Kaligantsarios wrote using the word nigger, but dad that poem has been removed so I couldn’t read it for myself but I did read his reply and his blog to this poem . Annie this is his reply [I still think you would make a great host and wish you would apply. You have a great persona and great outlook on things. I really wish I could have gotten to meet you while you were in Houston.Annie just call me we can talk better

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