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Foiled Again, Dad...
Hey Dog!
Where the hell do you think you're going?
"I'm not going anywhere Dad."
Well, you looked like you were.
"No Dad, I'm just looking around with my nose."
If you go past the car, you will go back inside.
"I won't Dad."
Just remember...
"O.K. Dad."
[My big, brown eyes, get him everytime]
[dum-ti-dum,ti dum...]
[So far, so good...]
DANCER!
"What?"
Where are you?
[Shit!...I thought he was busy.]
"Here I am, Dad."
Oh, ok...I just wondered where you were.
[Phew...He didn't see me...]
[Maybe I should just be cool today]
[There are those new treats...]
Ok... I'll go get the parts.
Dancer!
[Ahhhhh...]
Want a treat?
"Hmmmmm, maybe..."
I got new ones.
[ Hey, this could work out great!]
[ I always get one when he comes back too]
[I just gotta, give him the sad eye look...]
[You left me, sigh...]
"Ok Dad, I'm coming."
[Now don't hurry, make it look like, aw com'on Dad, I was just havin' fun.]
"Aw, right! New treat!" [ Don't be too happy now.]
Be right back, Baby.
Crunch, crunch..."Hurry back, Dad!
Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
This is so adorable Gee you
hardcorechick28
16 years 2 months ago
very cute
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Gee, Gee…..My greatest joy
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
And wait, theres more, yay!!!
lou
16 years 2 months ago
Little boy
Geezer
16 years 2 months ago
Actually Lou...
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