no lipstick, no strawberry fields

I will have to say that your opening lines were captivating. Only a lady poet could have structured those words in that way, that a man would have to read farther. Now I think there is so much raw material in this poem that you could expand on. Just my love to you in my words Press

wonderful write with layers of meaning,I thought it was very clever big smiles love JayCee

that I am trying to mix in with a clever theme! Well executed! Bonita j

Whit.. an ingenious sentence ! Mark Resilient Flexibility

This is your art, WT: taking the mundane and creating sublimity. ~A p.s. Were is the correct usage... was would be incorrect, as applied to a possibility.. ECW p.p.s. I forgot to mention the title. Oh, the title!! Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar

Dear W., I loved it so perfectly sublime. P.

yours always satisfy my prime criteria of poetry- ruthless elimination of the inessential and compression of meaning. But I wish you would stop clicking "Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)" Your poems do not need much work but it inhibits feedback. This one is potent and perhaps a bit sexist. Zippers unzipping are surely evocative to both genders. Just women and many men think further. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Ann of Norway Oh WHAT A TITLE titivating our minds beforehand in anticipation we pressed the button and sailed into this ladder to depravity, or what not!!! Love Ann

Work this up, young lady!...great theme...I love the fact you focus on sexy subjects. There's definitely more mileage in this image... Ells x

great poem imagination is still the greatest thrill for some and not all pants (Dictated by fashion trend location and design..) have zips some have snaps buttons and ties Esker~