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Mar 19, 2010
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BREATHE IN MY ENGLAND
Saxon names of places
magical and blue,
the geographic
Lakeland scenes-
Hallen Fell, Skiddaw,
names ancient, pre-dating
calm.
Romantic Englands'
pretty jewel- in contrast
to other mountains
mileu.
Beacon Tarn and
moss-covered bridges
like wistful retreats, make
Lakeland's lofty
perspectives a
treat.
Breathe in my England,
the views to inspire.
Jaw-dropping tracts
meandering valleys
hewn
from vengeful Titans
to shape and tarry
hard places,
now benign.
Still lovely
my England,
still lovely
beyond
compare.
Ellie LaCrosse
— panaella, Mar 19, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Ellie
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
typo....
jetz
16 years 2 months ago
Hi, Great imagery in this.
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you,
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
the last two stanzas were what this poem should be
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks, Jess
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
[smiles] myths and legends often contain more poetic truth
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Ok..I'll re-work it..Uber-critiquer
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