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THE KISS OF A RANCID MOUTH

'I'll stand my turn
for a kiss
from the rancid mouth

It's in my mind
like a cancker
beckoning me to
respond to it's
sublime sulpherous seep

Diabolo's cheer from
the deep swelling
depths of rancid
emotion

rise up to
drown
the wicked clear
messages
I'm trying to mouth
soundlessly

to the man
who doesn't
weep
and spits out
disdain
endlessly'

(you know who you are...)

Ellie LaCrosse

— panaella, Mar 29, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

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panaella

16 years 2 months ago

If the cap fits...

Takes one to know one... Thank you...wanting the kiss of the killing kind...sealing fates...to a satanic place of pure evil that is exquisite. I'm sure you understand the pleasure /pain pricipal... Ells x
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loved

16 years 2 months ago

Rancidity what

Rancidity can still be so sweet, Oh what a retreat. I can yet ask for a treat As I wish too for a rancid one A sweetest acids’, Life taking or life giving kiss… So many poems I’ve written On many a kiss, It’s the first acceptance By some one, That rancid can be awesome… loved BOA
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panaella

16 years 2 months ago

thank you

you got it! the tragic allure of the destructive forces... Ells.

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