Incantation of Seduction

Need a cold shower...hot write! 5+ stars my lovely! Lucky hub! very evocative piece. Luv Ells x

your last few writes i've been reading with my eyes covered....!!!! good god girl, get a room love and hugs judd xxx loving them by the way

Let's just make that a tenner! (stars that is!!) where do you get off with this stuff? THe same station you take us to? Honestly, it just keeps gettin better! Boni

Ann of Norway Always the cook? You could have eaten him, that's how one feels sometimes isn't it; the cover on the ham of pink deliciousness is torn off, the fibres quickened and strong, the intensity of perfumes all the senses in a dither. Yu went and did it didn't yu Jayne as you warned us! You hover together in a lustful desire, touching here and there. I had better stop right now. Love Ann

hi mmmmmm , good good , needs nothing only to be read ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs

lalalalala! Mummy "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

told you one day your going to kill me,and i see what you mean about the other rotflmfao love hubby xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

never know what shall be but shall be intense!! Esker~

Ooohh I am a mummy of love, that was great Seren. I love a good story and lots of passion. 5 stars. Well done! Julie D.D.

Beautiful, elegant, as ever. :) I love the word 'incantation', it's a favourite. musk and oak, wafted invisible incantations that pulsed the air, Pheremones? Could also be incense. Love that. :)

I felt your hand bunched in Egyptian cotton, unbinding a days inhibitions, all tangled up in the sheets, huh? LOL. But seriously, A very absorbing poem, up to your normal high standards. Love, Cat

Where do you find these men that smell like trees? I want one! LOL JUST KIDDING! Please don't start sending boys over. There's enough estrogen wafting around this house to kill five or six of them and we couldn't just have handsome corpses laying around the house, mama would whoop my ass! I love the sultriness of the poem and the subtly of the eroticism...well at least until the end... unless eating him has something to do with cannibalism and not what I think it has to do with...if you could see my right I'm probably bright red...hehe Stanza 1: days-->day's Stanza 3: fingers-->finger's (I think?) tongues-->tongue's I'm gonna stop and leave my critique at that, 'cause if I have to read that poem again I'm gonna start laughing like a mad woman and talking to myself in really hushed tones and no one wants that. ;) Kelsey

erotic but poetic, good to see it said. You struck the right balance between real and suggested.

Oh! not that kind of eating, sorry. Hmmmmm, maybe Killer has got something a little twisted there. He does mix sex with cooking.... I will have to examine his motivations a little more closely. You know, 'they' say, that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach! I guess I'm a little twisted myself. LOL ~ Great stuff! Love and hugs, ~ Gee

Yeah, Killer is thinking. He is wondering if he should go to culinary school. Might be fun, with all those tempermental cooks and sharp knives, and graters and such around. First, I gotta do one in honor of all the "she bears" out there. Glad to be around. Thank you, and I am running as fast as I can, to catch up with the stuff everyone has posted. Nice to see you at my chats for the last couple of weeks. Hope you can make it for the next one. Seeya, Higgest bugs, and lotta love ~ Gee