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Craig Norris
Apr 03, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

my twin revolving heart

My darling, I fell
sleeping on the couch
as you went walking,
while motorcycles were weaving
spring sunshine
down smiling Stockholm streets.

Would I not smile
were I not beneath
your treading feet ?
would I not feel
eternity,
between the pleasures
of your footfalls
softly falling ?

As automobiles glide
along these cobbled causeways,
our planets wheel above
as  should I,
always turn
to you,
my twin revolving heart.
— Craig Norris, Apr 03, 2010

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

Awsome

Great write. Loved it. Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
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Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

Hey Alice

thanks for the comments, love it that you enjoyed this. cheers Craig.
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odd molly

16 years 2 months ago

‘and it turnsas a

'and it turns as a thousand suns weaving us as threads of gold' love and love your poem. love. o molly
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Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

thank you molly

for these threads so fine that Spiderman himself would be envious. love and love Craig
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Sensoul

16 years 2 months ago

...and as an old

...poet friend of Odd Molly's I am so happy to find her again. Here. And to also find hers, and other friends here. And I am so happy to read these so seamlessly soft lines, words of silk that you write to your poet twin. A most beautiful pleasure to feel, makes me remember...a time when love was "over" and tears had fallen to silk, yet here they feel alive within these poetic cobblestones of light. A very nice write, looking forward to reading more. Kindly, Sensoul
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Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

thank you for your kind words

Sensoul, o molly has told me you are a neighbour, welcome to the site, hope you find it rewarding, look forward to reading your work, and thanks again. cheers Craig

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