Intimate audition

whisper to me - if only with your sighs!!! Loved it - short and sweet! Boni

Wish someone would whisper in my ear and make me feel like that! Just got my wee pet rat Zak in my ear sometimes, not whispering though, nibbling...hope that doesn't spoil your moment at the thought of a rat in your ear Nina...Love it. Rosina xena465

Firstly, this is a good piece and flows well. The reading flow is smoother than than speaking flow and I would like to address that by offering a more intimate word in a couple of places and adding a line to expand the mood. Suggestions are [bracketed] ---------------------------- You [needn't] read novels to me nor [recite rapturous] poems when you whisper in my ear it’s not the words that matter it’s your breath that sweet tingling caress resounds in my cochlea [and I quiver] we are here we are alive we are real ------------------------------------- --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

Who wouldn't want to whisper in your ear after that Nina, grandly simple and inviting. Whisper whisper, Your talent to catch me and hold my attentions are astonding. You know all the boys will want to resound in your choclea. LOL. I almost wanted a little nibble of a lobe though, but I am only the student and learning from the teacher. I Loved it. Julie D.D.

This is brilliant ... the soft touch of the title draws a mood straight away ... [intimate] silences the mind to be told something extraordinary I am running out of superlatives hun fucking brilliant will have to do love and hugs JayCee x x x

Enjoyed it. A short poem with an indepth meaning. 5 stars.

my vocal membranes sussurate.... Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

Ann of Norway The music of one's breath that's so intimate and lovely Nina, and that suggestive word the cochlea which has the ring of the shell the conch shell in which we hear the whispers of the sea and far off places, setting the mood to that of contemplation with the lull of the waves wafting in our ears. When I read to Erik he goes to sleep at the sound of my voice, so its no good hoping for comprehension of the book. A poem in the NOW. Love to you dear Nina from Ann.

An audible sigh I leave for you, Nina, along with a nod to Jonathan's suggestion. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

* for the scent of passion in his breath* I loved what you wrote . Few words but said so much. love o molly

Wow!!!! Nina, You blessed my morning! What more can we expect from a poet? Love you for this!! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

its lovely its lovely its lovely that's how i always say to thee to thee to thee PLEASE SEE I ALWAYS HAVE FOLLOWED THE TREE TIMES STYLE ALL THOSE WHO LAUGHED NOW LIKE IT. TYPO fault pl read in lowe r case sorry ...

Nina, Although this was short, it was from the heart and packed a punch. Beautiful! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

This is your short I have ever read.Short poems are easily consume and digested.You did it with a touch of eclat.You did touched me to the core of my heart.

I get the same feelings with his breath on my neck... Always, Cat

wanna find out if you have come out with any publication yet.If yes, kindly let me know where I can get a copy whether soft or hard

This was amazing, trully stunning. Greeneyes

Why do we fear words when they have been rose-palmed hands, fragrant, passing gently over our cheeks, and glasses of heartening wine sipped, one summer, by thirsty lips? *** Dear Nina if you liked my replay I'll be happy to send the rest of this lines. nice work and I like it, but I think there is some thing missing maybe (more details) but it's clear .With all respect . Mona

Please let me know when you publish, too. Always, Cat

Resonates so well. The ending we are here, are alive, I liked it and maybe I shall try one of these wee wons!! LOL This one does deserve the cookie cheer for sure Nina Thanks for all you are and do for this site. You are one heck of a woman!! How is your Father and I wish all to be well. My dad still not up to par and I guess as they age we must age with them, sad to say but a true aspect of adult children and older parents. The love is all that matters and of course the time well spent with them is all we can give sometimes. Kudos to your whispering write:) Love, Mona xoxoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Simple and yet powerful

loved it. haven't seen you in a while. please post more. t_f

Fucking brilliant! This is why you are who I turn to when I need a read that simulates my creative energy with powerful simplicity! I bow to you on this one... Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

take a five , this was very deep, much respect to you, its really in you. i mean poetry. chumfin

Hello Ink Dragon. It is very nice to meet you. I have to say after reading this poem I am hooked. It is short and to the point and very deep. I like the whole flow of the piece and how it is saying that someone does not need to do or say anything special to impress you, but that they just need to be there for you. How what the two people in this poem have something real. Very impressive piece, can't wait to read more.