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sutton
Apr 05, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Showing Her Skin



she's so slutty

showing her skin

in a place so cruddy

 

eyes are bloody 

must be a sin

she's so slutty

 

she makes me nutty

who knows where she's bin

in a place so cruddy

 

i watch with a buddy

and next to kin

she's so slutty

 

i turn to putty

drinking gin 

in a place so cruddy

 

her knees are muddy

pop her tits with a pin

she's so slutty

in a place so cruddy


— sutton, Apr 05, 2010

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Country/Region: Ontario

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sutton

16 years 2 months ago

oh

your name is "ephraim crud"... sorry no meaning behind that in poem, didn't realize, just having a hard time making these poems for the contest, it's like a school project, only i wouldn't have tried so hard in school, strangely enough i seem to work harder for an old pen, instead of a future. weird how that happens, i have another one for the contest called "Battle", maybe you could help me and tell me if I'm on the right track. thank you all for the comments!

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