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Apr 06, 2010
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PASSIVE SILENCE FOR A SHIELD
I am a mediocre poet
It must be true
the god of words
has divined it so
-let's assume he's male this god
And do we care if
passive silence
is now a shield
from cruel barbs
that pass for
intellectual superiority?
I am a mediocre mother
It must be true
the god of caring
has divined it so
-let's assume she's female this god
And let's be clear-'mediocre'
is intended to insult
I am a mediocre human
It must be true
the god-my god
has divined it so
-let's assume it's asexual this god
So make peace
with
poet, child, god
And find
a voice
a strength
a way
on your journey
to truth
It must be true
the god of words
has divined it so
-let's assume he's male this god
And do we care if
passive silence
is now a shield
from cruel barbs
that pass for
intellectual superiority?
I am a mediocre mother
It must be true
the god of caring
has divined it so
-let's assume she's female this god
And let's be clear-'mediocre'
is intended to insult
I am a mediocre human
It must be true
the god-my god
has divined it so
-let's assume it's asexual this god
So make peace
with
poet, child, god
And find
a voice
a strength
a way
on your journey
to truth
— panaella, Apr 06, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear P
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you JC
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Mr Crud
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I love the format and the
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Rosina
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
Witty and delightfully barbed
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
thank you
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you
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