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Apr 09, 2010
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suspended animation
Translation: I was stting on my "behind", but I really wanted to do something else at the time ;)....
suspended animation In the nooks and cranniespsychic crevices of mentalvacuumoctuplets of digits pound awayas the raga unwinds on its coursedown an emerald pathfringed by lianas of purplesticky heat clings desperately toone's visualacuitymisconstruingreinterpretingthe fata morgana is itoscillatestantalizingly on a par withpremium writhings ofharem queensequipped with shimmering drachmassigns of fidelity ortemptationas the eternal drums drone onpersuasivesilky percussioninterspliced with sitar harmoniesand effortless manipulationof the physical formin comeliness and callousedutterly spentmonstrousgrotesques as well as Persianpatterns of life and reverencewoven into animate fabric as itcrystalizescondenses itself lithely into adiamantinegrain a speck barelyintelligiblelegibly discernibleyet so intensely vibrant and endowed with warmth and lifethat it may be submerged in lilacwaterlogged subterranean chasmsbut its echo would not diminish in itsintensityeven in deathas it rotates in agonizing suspensionortranquil equilibriumspintumblecalmcore.
suspended animation In the nooks and cranniespsychic crevices of mentalvacuumoctuplets of digits pound awayas the raga unwinds on its coursedown an emerald pathfringed by lianas of purplesticky heat clings desperately toone's visualacuitymisconstruingreinterpretingthe fata morgana is itoscillatestantalizingly on a par withpremium writhings ofharem queensequipped with shimmering drachmassigns of fidelity ortemptationas the eternal drums drone onpersuasivesilky percussioninterspliced with sitar harmoniesand effortless manipulationof the physical formin comeliness and callousedutterly spentmonstrousgrotesques as well as Persianpatterns of life and reverencewoven into animate fabric as itcrystalizescondenses itself lithely into adiamantinegrain a speck barelyintelligiblelegibly discernibleyet so intensely vibrant and endowed with warmth and lifethat it may be submerged in lilacwaterlogged subterranean chasmsbut its echo would not diminish in itsintensityeven in deathas it rotates in agonizing suspensionortranquil equilibriumspintumblecalmcore.
— Shango007, Apr 09, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Shango
Shango007
16 years 2 months ago
I always appreciate your
swa
16 years 1 month ago
wow.suspended animation is a
Shango007
16 years 1 month ago
I was heavily caffeeinated
arja
16 years 1 month ago
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