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Apr 11, 2010
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On a Winter Beach
The waves crashed and pounded like motorway pile ups, so my partner on this winter walk thought. I shouted to him what do you want,! his ears rattled and his head shook as if shocked by gunfire,
his face was screwed up like old newspaper , he looked confused, his face went calm, then he said good bye walked away-I
turned away and walked in the opposite direction , I had run after him too many times before. This is where I wanted to be.
his face was screwed up like old newspaper , he looked confused, his face went calm, then he said good bye walked away-I
turned away and walked in the opposite direction , I had run after him too many times before. This is where I wanted to be.
— pinksheep, Apr 11, 2010
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