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there is a hush and the light play begins

there is a hush and the light play begins
I open my eyes and reawaken
on the stage of my life,
it is Spring

the Troubadour
of Feathers
in their ribald ritual
break the night of silence

sunlight filters through my window
in octaves of sound,
the wind is bare
and you will leave tomorrow,
we will write poems
with our summer hearts,
we will finish what we started
and nothing is going to change
our world
five hundred miles away.








— Kailashana, Apr 12, 2010

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Miles can never separate the

Miles can never separate the heart and soul...lovely Kailashana. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dearest Mum

you are not parting you are already, one in word and in the flesh love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!

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