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Apr 12, 2010
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there is a hush and the light play begins
there is a hush and the light play begins
I open my eyes and reawaken
on the stage of my life,
it is Spring
the Troubadour
of Feathers
in their ribald ritual
break the night of silence
sunlight filters through my window
in octaves of sound,
the wind is bare
and you will leave tomorrow,
we will write poems
with our summer hearts,
we will finish what we started
and nothing is going to change
our world
five hundred miles away.
I open my eyes and reawaken
on the stage of my life,
it is Spring
the Troubadour
of Feathers
in their ribald ritual
break the night of silence
sunlight filters through my window
in octaves of sound,
the wind is bare
and you will leave tomorrow,
we will write poems
with our summer hearts,
we will finish what we started
and nothing is going to change
our world
five hundred miles away.
— Kailashana, Apr 12, 2010
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xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Miles can never separate the
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Mum
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so sad and so i don't know the word
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