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Butter-fly fairies of August

Jack is the hobbit that doesn’t give a shit
that his dirty fangs are filtering the air
the levitation buried in ecstasy is important
when laughing, faced backwards,
sun dies for a fucking second though in that
moment of singularity
the opossum faces stop walking and concentrate
their no-shaped words on my skinny potbelly

on the constantly repaired pavements,
some red other blue,
slags offer him the already used flowers
kisses smelling like hormones
and jigsaws melt in his bitumen mind

for a freaking moment I felt
a déjà-vu

sun gave us a blowjob


— Marius Surleac, Apr 14, 2010

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Man, the same thing happened

Man, the same thing happened to me just this morning! Smiles, Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

16 years 1 month ago

Anna

This is a good thing. Thank you very much for your kind comment. Cheers, Marius
Esker

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

BANG THE BONGO

I remember when the coin dispenser failed to produce my plastic bauble bubble quarter stuck like my life jammed fuck fuck fuck and all is locked behind insidious humour gathered like cheap reputation in the bomb bay of ejaculation
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

16 years 1 month ago

cool

you have a nice poem here Eskeron. Great. thank you for the shiny ones. Cheers, Marius

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