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Apr 18, 2010
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CLIFF CRESCENDO
We walk to the edge of the cliff
the wind blows and makes
sweeping darts across my face
the sting and slap of wet hair
beating out natures force
pulse pulse rise rise
I feel giddy looking over the edge
and seeing the white combs
gathering a pace and smashing
their fury onto granite and crag
smash smash boom boom
Your hand finds mine and tugs
me close your mouth smothers
all reproof-I feel the surge
and succumb to delicious
delirium
swell swell throb throb
As you lift my face to yours
and sweep my buffeted hair
out of my eyes
you kiss wax -like skin
and blooms of carmine hue
burst forth driving your
animation
pulse pulse rise rise
Screaming shorelines slip
into our auditory
whoa! thundering combing
squealing rush
It powers your ardour
and the surrounding wrath
is mirrored in our lust
pound pound crash crash
tearing rages stinging whips of hair
rising blooms and moisten flesh
our crescendo is drowned by
the breaking rearing
ocean dying on its momentum
foaming pools of calm
drifting to dark recessess
pulse pulse ebb ebb
flow
flow
flow
flow
the wind blows and makes
sweeping darts across my face
the sting and slap of wet hair
beating out natures force
pulse pulse rise rise
I feel giddy looking over the edge
and seeing the white combs
gathering a pace and smashing
their fury onto granite and crag
smash smash boom boom
Your hand finds mine and tugs
me close your mouth smothers
all reproof-I feel the surge
and succumb to delicious
delirium
swell swell throb throb
As you lift my face to yours
and sweep my buffeted hair
out of my eyes
you kiss wax -like skin
and blooms of carmine hue
burst forth driving your
animation
pulse pulse rise rise
Screaming shorelines slip
into our auditory
whoa! thundering combing
squealing rush
It powers your ardour
and the surrounding wrath
is mirrored in our lust
pound pound crash crash
tearing rages stinging whips of hair
rising blooms and moisten flesh
our crescendo is drowned by
the breaking rearing
ocean dying on its momentum
foaming pools of calm
drifting to dark recessess
pulse pulse ebb ebb
flow
flow
flow
flow
— panaella, Apr 18, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Niiiiiiiice!~Asp. ~ succumb
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Anna!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Memory to poem brilliantly
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
the sea
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
goodness ellie
raj
16 years 1 month ago
very expressive and
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Wonderful Writing
loved
16 years 1 month ago
par par par excellence
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
Yes,
Carchuleto
16 years 1 month ago
yes yes yes yes
ngaioBeck
16 years 1 month ago
Crescendo
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