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GLIMPSE

You never feel more complete
or real  as when you're loved
The surge of potential
pleases and elevates

And when you hear
'I Adore You'
by your
soul's twin
It is your glimpse
of transcendendance-

You're blessed with
rare benefaction
and feels like your
armour's steely core
is tensile to withstand
life's vagaries

Those that dont feel
the same- and
their hordes are
mulitudinous
shy shame's
curse of completeness

And forever search like
Pilgrim Souls to find
the missing
light
— panaella, Apr 25, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I adore it

Brill passionate write Paenella. Rosina xena465
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

a good spiritual

a good spiritual rendition...Panaella i liked its gentle tone....raj
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Ells

the best compliment I can give you ... is 'sigh' wonderful poem you are really writing amazing stuff lately I hope you realise it love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you all...

I'm not sure about my work anymore...suppose i'm more sensitive to critique than I thought. My style is evolving I suppose...I'm trying to do different things...different themes...different structures. But I'm feeling wistful and feeling my mortality of late...I dunno! Ells x

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