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Apr 25, 2010
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GLIMPSE
You never feel more complete
or real as when you're loved
The surge of potential
pleases and elevates
And when you hear
'I Adore You'
by your
soul's twin
It is your glimpse
of transcendendance-
You're blessed with
rare benefaction
and feels like your
armour's steely core
is tensile to withstand
life's vagaries
Those that dont feel
the same- and
their hordes are
mulitudinous
shy shame's
curse of completeness
And forever search like
Pilgrim Souls to find
the missing
light
or real as when you're loved
The surge of potential
pleases and elevates
And when you hear
'I Adore You'
by your
soul's twin
It is your glimpse
of transcendendance-
You're blessed with
rare benefaction
and feels like your
armour's steely core
is tensile to withstand
life's vagaries
Those that dont feel
the same- and
their hordes are
mulitudinous
shy shame's
curse of completeness
And forever search like
Pilgrim Souls to find
the missing
light
— panaella, Apr 25, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I adore it
raj
16 years 1 month ago
a good spiritual
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Ells
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you all...
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