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May 10, 2010
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ACCEPTANCE
A loner browsing through the web
my interest at an all time ebb
I came upon a site by chance
and thought that I would take a chance
So I stole a furtive look
a wondrous scene my eyes partook
for there I saw:freeform,haiku,
sonnets,and forms I never knew
there all at once,and in one place
none called the others a disgrace
each taking turn,as if the norm
some spoke in more than just one form
As I sat there with mouth agape
a tiny thought took furtive shape
perhaps in this room that I see
were those who'd accept even me!
I slipped into the window,then
not knowing if I'd find e'en one friend
I slowly pecked out garbled line
and everybody said"that's fine"
They saw behind my clumsy fingers
perhaps some type of wordsmith lingers
I was lucky and I know it
for stumbling onto NEOPOET
for all my new and future friends at neopoet
my interest at an all time ebb
I came upon a site by chance
and thought that I would take a chance
So I stole a furtive look
a wondrous scene my eyes partook
for there I saw:freeform,haiku,
sonnets,and forms I never knew
there all at once,and in one place
none called the others a disgrace
each taking turn,as if the norm
some spoke in more than just one form
As I sat there with mouth agape
a tiny thought took furtive shape
perhaps in this room that I see
were those who'd accept even me!
I slipped into the window,then
not knowing if I'd find e'en one friend
I slowly pecked out garbled line
and everybody said"that's fine"
They saw behind my clumsy fingers
perhaps some type of wordsmith lingers
I was lucky and I know it
for stumbling onto NEOPOET
for all my new and future friends at neopoet
— scribbler, May 10, 2010
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Critiques
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Great one
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
acceptance
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Yes indeed even I have some too
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
acceptance
shane
16 years 1 month ago
Great poem. I feel the same.
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Scribbler
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Well presented poetry!
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Gee Shirley
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
acceptance
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
write from your heart
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Ha, ha, no Shirley
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
acceptance
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
accept...
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
excellent
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
accept.......
hippiepoet69
16 years 1 month ago
even Outlaws like me are welcome here
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