SANGUINE

Red now the colour of anger red now the colour of insanity Red now the morn sky to fear Red the scarlett woman who all man love and lust Seabhac

Great poem it got right in my veins! Lovely Ells much love shirley harrison

I like the way you deal with different reasons people bleed, and the way it is punctuated by the chorus.

the chorus really doesn't need bold or italics, the repetition is enough, this makes it a bit blunt-objecty Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

The blood of a poet flows in your veins if I have to tell you each time I will, again and again ... sigh wonderful poetry darlin I loved this one ... love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe P.S sorry to be late I've been horizontal line dancing in bed all week, actually I've sleeping ;) but I feel heaps better today ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")