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Candlewitch
Candlewitch
May 12, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Spoons

spoons.

folding, holding,

growing thick

with need,

in the small of my back,

pulsing gently

through...

the warmth of two

moulded into one.


— Candlewitch, May 12, 2010

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 1 month ago

A very,

comfortable way with words, Great write. Regards Roscoe...
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 1 month ago

Spoons

Cat, nice and simple and creates the image perfectly. Thought I'd give you an extra line...for free! The warmth of two, melted/moulded into one. Good luck tomorrow my friend, Dan ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Dan

Your line finishes it off, beautifully. Always, Cat
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

excellent!

wonderful Cat mills and spoons! much love cat! shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

There is a saying

..... We alllllll are spoons… Meaning flatterers And Servants Of the masters Those who matter… Perhaps they will come over Remember our taste and the dishes They lick Will in their memories stick… How I wish I wish, I wish I was a spoon of all poets here Oh! How I wish!
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Nice one Cat

You could add in the kitchen sink ha, ha, ha. I'm glad that you're not so angry now. Rosina xena465
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Rosina

Thank you. and, I, too am glad my anger is spent. I don't like being angry, it feels horrible. Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Cat

I loved your poem thought it was HOT HOT HOT sorry to be late getting here but it was worth the wait ... hope alls going well with you I was thinking of you all night last night wondering how you were doing hope your ok huni and on the mend love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Jayne-Chloe

Thank you, glad you like it. I am starting to feel better, so I can spend more time here. I hope you are well. Love, Cat
Z

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi cat

hi cat, a nice wee ditty , i`d love to know your thoughts behind this one always ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Ziggy

Thank you. I'd say my thoughts were on the warm and cuddly side ;) Always, Cat
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hi Hobo

Glad to see your face. Thanks for the visit. Always, Cat
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

I imagine a tantric spoonbender, bending, melding

your poetry and my mind make an interesting team love, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Had to come back and have

Had to come back and have another read still wonderful ... just leaving my 'I was here' lol love and hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

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