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May 12, 2010
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ESCAPE THE SUNDERING
Like a woodblock split in two
Is how I think
of my tainted love with you
That we love each other
is not the issue
Like a tsunami
crashing, wombing, breaking
flowing, screaming passion
It's not the looks, smoldering
and breathless
oh no-it's the silences
the miscommunication
the missed calls
the sulking
the tears
the screwed up emotions
the damaged ego
the fear of permanency
Mooted wisps of marriage
talk-isn't that the way through
all this morass of joy?
As traditional a union as it is
It's not for us
I fear
The sundered cleaves
the woodblock splits
each a part of the whole
you
me
we
Is how I think
of my tainted love with you
That we love each other
is not the issue
Like a tsunami
crashing, wombing, breaking
flowing, screaming passion
It's not the looks, smoldering
and breathless
oh no-it's the silences
the miscommunication
the missed calls
the sulking
the tears
the screwed up emotions
the damaged ego
the fear of permanency
Mooted wisps of marriage
talk-isn't that the way through
all this morass of joy?
As traditional a union as it is
It's not for us
I fear
The sundered cleaves
the woodblock splits
each a part of the whole
you
me
we
— panaella, May 12, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Wowsers! Kick-arse poem!
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you!
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wow Ells!
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Rally nice one here Pan
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Love is like that
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you've done it again ellie
raj
16 years 1 month ago
unique write...
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