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May 30, 2010
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INVADERS
Reach inside me take the Thought-Fox
he's cunningly residing in my brain
not to mention
my soul
as he hears all my giddy thoughts about
you
yes
every one
Reach inside my guts wrench out
the Amoeba it's working it's way
through the maze of complicated
channels that gurgle and twist
at the mention
of your name
you
yes
every time
Reach inside my heart split open
the Valve-Keeper he's secretly stopping
the flow to each vessel
it's causing some distress
as I look at you
yes
you
every where
he's cunningly residing in my brain
not to mention
my soul
as he hears all my giddy thoughts about
you
yes
every one
Reach inside my guts wrench out
the Amoeba it's working it's way
through the maze of complicated
channels that gurgle and twist
at the mention
of your name
you
yes
every time
Reach inside my heart split open
the Valve-Keeper he's secretly stopping
the flow to each vessel
it's causing some distress
as I look at you
yes
you
every where
— panaella, May 30, 2010
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panaella
16 years ago
Bad Boy
ngaioBeck
16 years ago
Invaders
judyanne
16 years ago
really love this descriptive
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