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INVADERS

Reach inside me take the Thought-Fox
he's cunningly residing in my brain
not to mention
my soul
as he hears all my giddy thoughts about
you
yes
every one

Reach inside my guts wrench out
the Amoeba it's working it's way
through the maze of complicated
channels that gurgle and twist
at the mention
of your name
you
yes
every time

Reach inside my heart split open
the Valve-Keeper he's secretly stopping
the flow to each vessel
it's causing some distress
as I look at you
yes
you
every where
— panaella, May 30, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

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panaella

16 years ago

Bad Boy

So...if you can't beat 'em, join 'em Hubby, eh? Thanks for the mention...very busy at the moment, but it's half term...i've some time free...for jotting! Mrs C xxx
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ngaioBeck

16 years ago

Invaders

Very Inventive. I've never seen poetic love (or lust) expressed quite so anatomically, but I suppose when you think about it"----"
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

really love this descriptive

making love the physical thing it is great write ellie love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

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