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panaella
Jun 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

DIRTY CITY LIVING

Pleasure Girls of swinging London,
bright lights, big city
partied out by midnight

Hedonistic heathens
sexual slatterns
dirty city living

Leisure Boys with their toys
gadgets galore
partied out by midnight

Pneumatic virgins
nihilistic neighbours
dirty city living

Come the morrow
the glitz looks cheap
and the fakery
the bed snakery suppurates
and spills into the
grey metallic roar

Dirty city living
— panaella, Jun 01, 2010

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mantiscepter

16 years ago

CITY

Remind me to avoid the city.... Was a good write, well used words, with a good understanding. story line, was very good. for this Day and age a good topic. John Mantiscepter
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Dirty city Living!

Hey Babe! does that mean being drunk as a skunk with a one night stand? Brilliant and your poetry is superb! shirley harrison

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