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Jun 07, 2010
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B-B-BREAKING
B-B-Breaking
B-B-Broken
B-B-Better the heart break
you know
There it goes
Snap!
The last chain-link
of connection
to you
sheared end
piercing
left ventricle
soon the bursting
blood swamping systems
Relief, if relief relieved
should create a calm chasm
Now the S-S-Soul searing
of regret and solitude
into the furnace incandescent
B-B-Broken chains
B-B-Broken links
B-B-Broken friendship
B-B-Broken glimpse of my
transcendence
B-B-Broken
B-B-Better the heart break
you know
There it goes
Snap!
The last chain-link
of connection
to you
sheared end
piercing
left ventricle
soon the bursting
blood swamping systems
Relief, if relief relieved
should create a calm chasm
Now the S-S-Soul searing
of regret and solitude
into the furnace incandescent
B-B-Broken chains
B-B-Broken links
B-B-Broken friendship
B-B-Broken glimpse of my
transcendence
— panaella, Jun 07, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years ago
Pushing the envelope.
judyanne
16 years ago
i really like this ellie
panaella
16 years ago
wanted to do something different with the sounds
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