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Jun 09, 2010
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Trans Atlantic ties
I called you the other day
you being so far away
funny how we are still friends
after all we have said and done
at least we can say
that there is someone we told
that somewhere down the line
we can tie up our loose ends
for distance has not torn us apart
each one half of a hell of a team
with you I could walk and talk all day
as it sometimes seems we do
just holding still, the best of friends
our relationship has stood up against the obstacles
of distance as well as the tests of time
our serendipitous friendship reigns
— lou, Jun 09, 2010
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DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
We did good Lou!JulieD.D.
lou
16 years ago
DD
JosephSommers
16 years ago
Lou and DD is awesome!
lou
16 years ago
Joey
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Oh Lou this is wonderful!
lou
16 years ago
Dear Shirley
shirley harrison
16 years ago
well done to both of you
Mark
16 years ago
Very good ending !
Kailashana
16 years ago
Friendship is the greatest!
lou
16 years ago
Dear all
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