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Jun 09, 2010
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HEROE
A toddler playing by the street
just sitting there and looking sweet
and from my old front porch swing
this old fart can hear him sing
As I sit on ageing rear
I hear a far truck shifting gear
the little boy, he doesn't heed
guess for him there is no need
I swing, my eyes begin to droop
about to doze off on my stoop
but just as I'm about to nap
my eyes reopen with a snap
They must have seen at the last minute
image of road with child now in it
truck racing now around the bend
now realize how this will end
Launch out of swing on aching knees
now seeing truck come through the trees
driver talking on cell phone
kid unaware and all alone
RUN old fool across the yard !!
accelerate you tub of lard !
child's eyes turn up to racing truck
his limbs are frozen, thunderstruck
Push legs, push! to be in time
those rigs can't stop on a thin dime !
as feet hit pavement I now see
the truck may very well beat me
"Not in this life ! " I quickly think
and dive, the kid's life on the brink
hands push him out of way in time
the truc..........
just sitting there and looking sweet
and from my old front porch swing
this old fart can hear him sing
As I sit on ageing rear
I hear a far truck shifting gear
the little boy, he doesn't heed
guess for him there is no need
I swing, my eyes begin to droop
about to doze off on my stoop
but just as I'm about to nap
my eyes reopen with a snap
They must have seen at the last minute
image of road with child now in it
truck racing now around the bend
now realize how this will end
Launch out of swing on aching knees
now seeing truck come through the trees
driver talking on cell phone
kid unaware and all alone
RUN old fool across the yard !!
accelerate you tub of lard !
child's eyes turn up to racing truck
his limbs are frozen, thunderstruck
Push legs, push! to be in time
those rigs can't stop on a thin dime !
as feet hit pavement I now see
the truck may very well beat me
"Not in this life ! " I quickly think
and dive, the kid's life on the brink
hands push him out of way in time
the truc..........
— scribbler, Jun 09, 2010
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Critiques
shirley harrison
16 years ago
wow Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
hero
judyanne
16 years ago
excellent you hero you
scribbler
16 years ago
heroe
xena465
16 years ago
Very imaginative Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
heroe
jetz
16 years ago
Fantastic. Your words
scribbler
16 years ago
heroe
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
heroe
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