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Nosegay
Drifting nostalgia from freshly turned soil,
raw sweet aroma of virgin breath born
incites my heart to manifest a memory
of a lifetime ago before it was torn.
So I close my eyes and around me space billows.
A curtain opens, a stage is revealed.
The light of my past calls softly to me
and I return to a scene that count has concealed.
Shadows shimmer in rippling deep eddies.
Melodious tones of times now long gone.
Fresh paint, new carpet, pristine polished timber.
The feel and the comfort of my very first home.
There in my tower of dreams now broken
in the dulcet frangipani of mind,
echo sounds of youth and untarnished laughter
and shades drift past on conceptions sublime.
Spry, vibrant, alive, strong and flexible,
the oyster spread prior to tears.
With the taste of innocence before great learning
I smell essences of my prefatory years.
Critiques
shirley harrison
16 years ago
i love your poetry!
judyanne
16 years ago
and you are too kind shirley
magics02
16 years ago
Judy Anne
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks magics
xena465
16 years ago
Gee Judy this is so good
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks rosina
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
...with each our parallel memories,
judyanne
16 years ago
annanya
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years ago
well that's a compliment
Seren
16 years ago
Ive got a few Judith Wright
judyanne
16 years ago
what else is there to do at four in the morning?
CyberSpace
16 years ago
Great poem Judyanne regards
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks for visiting snake
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