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Jun 10, 2010
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ELIMINATE
Like an acid attack
I want to burn off your
touch
Scrub my skin with wire wool
till I'm dripping with
blood
and taste the sweet tang of
repent
I hate you with a passion
so terrifying
I spew
spit
piss
all the vile bile
burning yellow
May you rot in a canopy
of cawl from your
first born
may it strangle
like a tourniquet
and turn the purple pustules
till they split and disgorge
their vituperous contents
You were made in
the devil's smithy
white curls of poison
were the sustenance
from the Jackals teet
By all that is Holy in my soul
I slash
burn
bite
cut
stamp
anything
all the above
to eliminate
the DNA
of your
derivation
— panaella, Jun 10, 2010
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Critiques
SophieHannah24
16 years ago
WOW
panaella
16 years ago
all in my imagination!
scribbler
16 years ago
eliminate
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
Wooooo, that was intense.
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Ell's
judyanne
16 years ago
passionate is the word ellie
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