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Jun 10, 2010
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MY OLD COAT
I've had my old coat quite a while
together we've walked many a mile
worn it when I hunt and fish
just any time that I might wish
All buttons are brown except one
went missing one day having fun
replaced with same sized one of red
sewn on one night right before bed
The collars gotten kind of frayed
not quite the same shape as when made
the years have moulded it to be
exactly right, contoured for me
The sheepskin liners not as white
nor outside plaid as crisp and bright
as on the day it was first worn
so long ago one frosty morn
Despite its many mends and patches
my temperment it closely matches
we're both a little old and beat
and I think thats kind of neat
And though I often catch a glance
of folks looking a bit askance
at me as I wear it around
they often grin and seldom frown
I guess we all have something we wear
as we go places, here and there
an item with which we emote
for me its my well-worn plaid coat
together we've walked many a mile
worn it when I hunt and fish
just any time that I might wish
All buttons are brown except one
went missing one day having fun
replaced with same sized one of red
sewn on one night right before bed
The collars gotten kind of frayed
not quite the same shape as when made
the years have moulded it to be
exactly right, contoured for me
The sheepskin liners not as white
nor outside plaid as crisp and bright
as on the day it was first worn
so long ago one frosty morn
Despite its many mends and patches
my temperment it closely matches
we're both a little old and beat
and I think thats kind of neat
And though I often catch a glance
of folks looking a bit askance
at me as I wear it around
they often grin and seldom frown
I guess we all have something we wear
as we go places, here and there
an item with which we emote
for me its my well-worn plaid coat
— scribbler, Jun 10, 2010
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magics02
16 years ago
Oh Scribe!!
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
magics02
16 years ago
I can not wait to show him this pic of you
Lonnie
16 years ago
Great read!
scribbler
16 years ago
old coat
poewriter58
16 years ago
Scribe
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
shirley harrison
16 years ago
"lovely"
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
xena465
16 years ago
Great Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
xena465
16 years ago
Love your pic
scribbler
16 years ago
pic
shirley harrison
16 years ago
i disagree!
judyanne
16 years ago
love this scribble scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
mand
16 years ago
He he he! Ya cool poem, who
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
Seren
16 years ago
Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
anonymous1
16 years ago
How have you managed...
scribbler
16 years ago
coat
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