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Jun 10, 2010
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Pastures Of Green,Only A Dream
Pastures of green
evaded me
throughout my childhood years
Summer days of youth
were not spent in game
the only time the air was fresh
after a pouring rain
There were chores to be done
no time for fun
but on rare occasions
there were times to be had
when permitted by dad
To go to the park
of concrete and steel
I cannot describe
how that walk made me feel
The sun beating down on black top roads
concrete under my feet
these were the times
I'd let my mind wander
and daydream of green and sweet
The air would reek of stale beer from the bars
along with exhaust from cars
and let us not forget
the cans filled with garbage
lining the apartment house walls
Dog refuse and urine
mixed with the smells of human
and the wolf whistles from
the men playing dominoes
But it was summer
and school was out
so you make the best
of what you had
and not what you did without
stick ball and handball
hop scotch and skates
oh and do not forget
the soap box scooters
that were handmade to race
Clothespin dolls and marbles
dreams of natures marvels
n'er a song bird to be heard
nor the fragrance of crisp clean air
Still I spent my summer days
as if I had not a care
evaded me
throughout my childhood years
Summer days of youth
were not spent in game
the only time the air was fresh
after a pouring rain
There were chores to be done
no time for fun
but on rare occasions
there were times to be had
when permitted by dad
To go to the park
of concrete and steel
I cannot describe
how that walk made me feel
The sun beating down on black top roads
concrete under my feet
these were the times
I'd let my mind wander
and daydream of green and sweet
The air would reek of stale beer from the bars
along with exhaust from cars
and let us not forget
the cans filled with garbage
lining the apartment house walls
Dog refuse and urine
mixed with the smells of human
and the wolf whistles from
the men playing dominoes
But it was summer
and school was out
so you make the best
of what you had
and not what you did without
stick ball and handball
hop scotch and skates
oh and do not forget
the soap box scooters
that were handmade to race
Clothespin dolls and marbles
dreams of natures marvels
n'er a song bird to be heard
nor the fragrance of crisp clean air
Still I spent my summer days
as if I had not a care
— poewriter58, Jun 10, 2010
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Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Chrys
poewriter58
16 years ago
JayCee
panaella
16 years ago
so evocative of an urban experience
poewriter58
16 years ago
Ells
themoonman
16 years ago
Chrys...
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16 years ago
Richard
themoonman
16 years ago
Yes...
mand
16 years ago
It sounds like you had a
poewriter58
16 years ago
Mand
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Annie
Kailashana
16 years ago
I suppose I was fortunate in
poewriter58
16 years ago
Anna
Lonnie
16 years ago
A Magnificent Memory Poem!
poewriter58
16 years ago
Lon
scribbler
16 years ago
pastures
poewriter58
16 years ago
Stan
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
Oh to remember the days back
poewriter58
16 years ago
Julie
magics02
16 years ago
Poe
poewriter58
16 years ago
Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Exactly
Morgan Rattica
15 years 11 months ago
Pastures of Green
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