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Go - And Get Stuffed.

Just words
Make them mean
what you want. Say
what you want. Nothing
on this Earth is as mighty as the pen. Remember
and for get, for go what time has told. Her
Word.
What she
said, what she says,
What she's willing to say...
How was your New Years Eve, Princess? You
heard the words and read. You
know what is said
I say. You
use your suchers well. Still
swelling form the heal.
My thoughts
are with
you,
so, go...

Get Stuffed

with shit,
Good,
good shit
and
Love...(all ways)
— Damo, Jun 11, 2010

Critiques

Beauregard

Beauregard

15 years 12 months ago

I've just now stumbled upon your poetry, Damo

I must say I'm enjoying the tales you weave. Get stuffed-- that's a new one for me to add to me reservoir of awesome synonyms for "get lost". Let's see...I've got: get lost go fuck yourself/get bent pound sand kiss my ass get stuffed eat shit Hmm. I feel like I have more, but they elude me. I haven't slept since the day before yesterday. LOL. I appreciate your profanity, if you can't tell! Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe
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Damo

15 years 12 months ago

Heheh!

Excellent! How about 'bugger off' or 'get a cow up ya'! Glad you could see the humour... just playing with words/phrases here - nothing too serious...do love to subvert colloquialisms occasionally though...!

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