ziggy

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A FRIEND INDEED

there is little we can do
this night let it wait until
the morn, I see your weary
head sense your yawn.

gone is that which has
passed looking back will
ever last frozen over or
crystal glass rest your mind
tonight is kind.

we all can see and yet are
blind when faced with which
we searched to find.

lay your burden by my side
soaked with tears that you
have cried alone inside,
rest your mind tonight is kind.

close your eyes and fall to
slumber where all your troubles
fall asunder tomorrow we shall
wake until then let it wait.

— ziggy, Jun 11, 2010

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Critiques

lou

16 years ago

AWW Ziggy.........

I love everything about this poem . love lou xxxx

ziggy

16 years ago

hello there

HI, great to get such a quick comment thank you, this was just a simple one i wrote before bed last night and i needed to post something soon it`s been a wee while thanks again have a good weekend ,,,,,,,,,,zigs

Hooded Stranger

16 years ago

'bout time!

Zigs, I have been worried about you, plenty of emails and pm's but no new work, but hey!, you're back and you haven't lost that touch of yours. I love your style and word usage, and this sits highly with your best. Clever rhyming style too, I missed it the first time around, but I was reading and watching the World Cup at the same time, so that's my excuse. Almost a chorus dropped subtly in the middle there too: we all can see and yet are blind when faced with which we searched to find. Good to have you back on the forum, good poem, good rhythm, it's like you haven't been away. HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

ziggy

16 years ago

hi

ah your worried about me lol cheers mate about time i sort of knew that was coming lol i often felt some of my writes have hidden meaning so i decided to write something a bit more simple for a change as i see it , i`m glad you think so much of this not sure i do but i am hard pleased lol. a chorus LOL good man hood its all yours , i do enjoy your comments and just so you know i am watching the footy to and i have to say its a crap game cheers hood ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs

Hooded Stranger

16 years ago

Zigs

Zigs, I'm only watching this boring game because I have France in the sweepstake at work! Obviously the fact you were cheated by the 'hand of God' goal against you, I just know you're cheering on Uruguay! Lol! HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

ziggy

16 years ago

lol

lol hood ya our team are pretty poor to say the least yes another hand of god years after the one ye had lol i truly don`t know who to back chat soon hood ,,,,,,,,zigs

xena465

16 years ago

Double WoW!

Ziggy, this so great. Very caring and touching and brought tears to my eyes. Like the saying goes, “Sleep on it and tomorrow brings new light”. Actually Zigs, I made up this quote from a part quote. What do you think? Not bad eh, but not as good as your wonderful words. Xena

ziggy

16 years ago

hi

hello there how have you been, ah i am glad this touched you that is something we all like to hear i can only say thank you i wrote this just before i went to bed last night " sleep on it and tomorrow brings new light " i guess it`s your take on " lets sleep on it" which i guess is the theme running through this one , cheers again ,,,,,,,,,zigs x

judyanne

16 years ago

tomorrow we shall wake, until then let it wait

i love this ziggy always best to face daunting problems after a night's sleep had a little trouble understanding what you were saying with 'looking back will ever last frozen over or crystal glass' but then, that's me - a bit thick sometimes love judy http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

ziggy

16 years ago

hello

hi and thank you for the comment the lines you picked out which is "looking back will ever last frozen over or crystal glass " well the first part looking back will ever last , simply means how we could spend the rest of our lifes looking back at where life and it`s trials has taken any one of us and "frozen over or crystal glass" as a follow on line means those events that we ponder on some as clear as yesterday in our minds as i mean as clear as glass crystal glass,while other memories are less clear in our passing view on it as to be frozen over,

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks for explaining that ziggy

so true love judy xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Ziggy

tomorrow we shall wake till then we let it wait ... good philosophy ... loved the poem Zigs sorry I am late love JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

ziggy

16 years ago