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Jun 12, 2010
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Love ~ 1972
To You
I offer
my cup
of fiery crystal
and frivolous gold
in silence
and with momentous sublimity
I enact
my love-gift:
I pour
the sanguine-coloured
mystique of wine
tasted
in attendance
with the
awakening
of our dream.
I touch
Your glass
in absentia
and propound
a night
of one thousand dreams,
venture into
a demesne
of loving;
I drink
the cold-warm
intoxication
and mellow
into the union,
forever lost
in its somnolence.
Dispassionately alone,
the blatant truth
envelops me:
Had I perceived
the sweet nectar of Paradise
and
never realized You?
Was perfection
ours for a moment's lifetime,
loosing millenia to ourselves?
I drink to you, Love,
Your memories and shadows,
within Your tortuous drink
the truth decries Truth.
The chalice
is emptied,
lonely drops of
blood-red liquid
dance inside as
in final recollection
Your face of Love
mirrored in my bitter cup,
And I ached to possess
Your visage for only a moment
longer,
my tears,
flowing warm and gentle,
deprived my illusion of You.
I salute You,
Love,
with outstretched hand,
reaching,
I clasp
Your cup,
and crush
Your victory.
~A
I offer
my cup
of fiery crystal
and frivolous gold
in silence
and with momentous sublimity
I enact
my love-gift:
I pour
the sanguine-coloured
mystique of wine
tasted
in attendance
with the
awakening
of our dream.
I touch
Your glass
in absentia
and propound
a night
of one thousand dreams,
venture into
a demesne
of loving;
I drink
the cold-warm
intoxication
and mellow
into the union,
forever lost
in its somnolence.
Dispassionately alone,
the blatant truth
envelops me:
Had I perceived
the sweet nectar of Paradise
and
never realized You?
Was perfection
ours for a moment's lifetime,
loosing millenia to ourselves?
I drink to you, Love,
Your memories and shadows,
within Your tortuous drink
the truth decries Truth.
The chalice
is emptied,
lonely drops of
blood-red liquid
dance inside as
in final recollection
Your face of Love
mirrored in my bitter cup,
And I ached to possess
Your visage for only a moment
longer,
my tears,
flowing warm and gentle,
deprived my illusion of You.
I salute You,
Love,
with outstretched hand,
reaching,
I clasp
Your cup,
and crush
Your victory.
~A
— Kailashana, Jun 12, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Mum
Kailashana
16 years ago
Lol, dearest. I wrote this
judyanne
16 years ago
beautiful anna
Kailashana
16 years ago
Yup. Those would be my
CyberSpace
16 years ago
Mum
mand
16 years ago
You have an incredible way
raskin
16 years ago
I clasp your cup and crush
Restlesslittlesoul
16 years ago
WOW!
scribbler
16 years ago
love
Restlesslittlesoul
16 years ago
Even if...
lou
16 years ago
Lovely
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Breathtaking!
Chris B
16 years ago
Inspired
xena465
16 years ago
What can I say Anna?
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
...and over the brim your poem spills.
RobertKnott
16 years ago
... "and in the silence,
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