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Jun 13, 2010
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ode to a grecian night
.
sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...
the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me
.
sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...
the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me
.
— pleiades, Jun 13, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years ago
Sigh. From here to eternity
pleiades
15 years 12 months ago
well, the bottle of ouzo
pleiades
15 years 12 months ago
thanks for stopping by
judyanne
16 years ago
beautiful
pleiades
15 years 12 months ago
you wanted more?imagine how
Seren
16 years ago
Dear P
pleiades
15 years 12 months ago
reaching to the black past
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