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panaella
Jun 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

PENIS PLOUGHS PERFECT

Your devouring
perfect penis
makes your
adoring
Venus wet

Awash with lubrication
soddened with secretion

It aches
it rides
it throbs
it slides

Into my moistened
garden
sowing sterile sticky seeds

No flowers will ever
grow to show
the perfection in our
union

But my fertile soil
is tilled and thrilled
to have so deep
a plough
— panaella, Jun 13, 2010

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lou

lou

16 years ago

ooh

simply pornographic lou xx
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

ellie !!!!

let me tell you it is very hard to read poetry when i have my hands over my eyes.... brave and clever write love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Beauregard

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

I'm going to have to second Judy

this is a bit of a tough one to read when I'm covering my eyes! My innocence! There it goes right out the winder! hehe Probably the most witty innuendos/metaphors I've ever read. :) Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Dear Ells

L:O:L i love this write, its so to the point and written most tastfully! much love shirley harrison
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scribbler

16 years ago

perfect

Gonna go take a cold shower..........scribbler
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Atticus

15 years 11 months ago

Sexual of course but not

Sexual of course but not vulgar. Quite clever. Pushed the boundaries (no pun intended) of common expectations. Like your gentleman caller, very well done. best, Nathaniel

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