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Jun 17, 2010
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Time has spent:
I wave it not -
That woven width of Whitened cloth -
Yet, espouse the value 'round the town.
This trick to turn
(Frowns upside-down)
Let go,
Let go…
And still.
I wave it not.
The whiteness of my cloth is red.
This cloth is but ragged thread.
The heated air of what I've said
Shan’t sail a flag atop my head.
And I will wave it not.
Lest this flag be waved (at last)
By someone else...
On my behalf!
I wave it not -
That woven width of Whitened cloth -
Yet, espouse the value 'round the town.
This trick to turn
(Frowns upside-down)
Let go,
Let go…
And still.
I wave it not.
The whiteness of my cloth is red.
This cloth is but ragged thread.
The heated air of what I've said
Shan’t sail a flag atop my head.
And I will wave it not.
Lest this flag be waved (at last)
By someone else...
On my behalf!
— Damo, Jun 17, 2010
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Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
I surrender! lol.superb
Damo
15 years 12 months ago
From you, I am humbled -
raskin
15 years 12 months ago
I had to smile on this
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