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Jun 22, 2010
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web-footed dark brown beaver
==
web-footed
dark brown
beaver
braves those currents of
a recent-born creek having
chosen the least
resistant though stream
indifferent rushes past her in
restless search of
another waterway
larger then another yet
another until
a vast community
finds its course at last to the
globe-embracing sea ...
and once there to
stagnate stultify to fester
to discharge the smell
of choking grease and
too of a terrible dying
==
web-footed
dark brown
beaver
braves those currents of
a recent-born creek having
chosen the least
resistant though stream
indifferent rushes past her in
restless search of
another waterway
larger then another yet
another until
a vast community
finds its course at last to the
globe-embracing sea ...
and once there to
stagnate stultify to fester
to discharge the smell
of choking grease and
too of a terrible dying
==
— barbsdad2003, Jun 22, 2010
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Mark
15 years 11 months ago
The beaver is lucky
barbsdad2003
15 years 11 months ago
Thanx, Mark
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